Is this a good poem..please read!?

Actually, it's very beautifully written. There is no requirement that a poem rhyme with any regularity. Be sure to go through it for capitals like "i" (as in "I" when you refer to yourself) and apostrophies ( ' ) where needed (as in I'm for I am, and you're when it indicates "you are"). Also, run a spell check. Congratulations on a well thought out and written poem.